Ineed a essay about “how to make a business successful”

Well, I am going to write a point that you could edit/turn into your own words and then you will have an idea :).

       Introduction: To make an introduction paragraph, make it intruiging quickly hinting topics that are important in this subject.

To make businesses successful, it takes a lot of effort but also organization. You not only will have to put in your best effort, you will also have to be ok with sacrifices. To get the best things in life, sacrifices must be made.

Middle Paragraphs ( an essay requires about 3-4) : Choose each point for each paragraph that is hinted in the introduction. Do not put all in one, otherwise it will become crowded.

Things you could include would be; organization, sacrifices, creativity, people, etc;

Conclusion: Wrap it up, hint back at the major points and add in some tips for certain businesses and how each would need different main focuses ( you can also include this in one of your middle paragraphs )

Best of luck! Watch your grammar mistakes and also make sure you don't use too many (I, me, you, they,them,us) Refer to the topic, not yourself or others.

-Tourmaline.

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