Aparagraph is coherent if
a.
all of the details are in the order in which they happened.
b.
the writer has chosen the best organizational method for the topic.
c.
all of the sentences relate to the controlling idea.
d.
the writing moves logically from one thought to the next.

do you know the story wonder?

well on wonder it has different stories from each person and they can all share their thoughts and feeling each not just one. if there was one you would only get to see one persons thoughts and feelings. so do a story point on multiple of the main characters.

hope i !

- lilblakeyout