Does Sandra Cisneros primarily characterize Esperanza using direct or indirect characterization?Does Sandra Cisneros primarily characterize Esperanza using direct or indirect characterization? This is from "The House On Mango Street.

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Ok so you say State House twice in the first sentence, so maybe you could try using other words.

You also say, "Now known as the Liberty bell." And you say it right after saying that we call the hall Independence Hall, so say something like:

'And now, we call the bell, Liberty Bell.'

Put a comma after Pennsylvania Assembly. (First paragraph Fourth Sentence)

When you say "It would right to call lawmakers to meetings." Did you mean ring?

In paragraph 2, connect sentences 4 &5.

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