Give a short story with dialogue. show don’t tell. story must lead to climax readers must feel what’s going on . longer than two paragraphs. best gets brainliest

- What a fright! I told you not to appear in fron of me anymore.

- You look tired.

- Thank you, mum. I used to love you, too.

- I still do.

- How's that possible. Does love exist in 'your town'?

- You woulnd't imagine how much!

- I'd ask you what you want, but I really don't care.

- Will you never forgive me?

- That's right! You're right. I can't believe what I'm saying, but you are right.

- Jimmy came to see me.

- I beg your pardon? Who?

- Jimmy.

- And who's that?

- He's Charles' son.

- Oh! I didn't know that womanizer had a son.

- Linda, Jimmy is Charles' son... and yours, too.

- Enough!

- You have to listen to me. If you don't accept to date Charles, you'll never marry him and Jimmy will never be born.

- Mum, are you nuts? You're chasing me and now this! You appear behind me in the mirror, you call me in the middle of the night, and now you pretend I've got a son. Aren't there better things to do in heaven?

- Actually there's nothing better than helping a sould to find a body and I need you and Charles to do so. Otherwise, you will be denying Jimmy's soul to find its way in the eternal search of peace. Will you listen to me now?

(Silence)

They more than likely wanted the play to last longer, and/or wanted a more dramatic effect. They add more drama but beside that not much. I think it personally had more impact as it drove the narrative and you felt more from the scenes

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