In the following excerpt, a writer tries to persuade his supervisor to respond to a government request for proposals (rfp) to build an unmanned surveillance plane for the military. which aspect of the paragraph undercuts the effectiveness of the passage

Well, without menus it would be impossible for chefs to sell their food, the images on the menu makes others want to order their food. And the ingredients helps in case of allergies. The prices on the side help the people decide what they want for what they think is a reasonable price.