Some help asap in my complaint letter. So far I have dear I am reaching out to you about the poor housekeeping services offered by the service provider. Since I work two shifts its really hard for me to clean my house...
I don't know what else to put some helps asap

I don't have all the context but maybe something along the lines of..

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Try something more like "To Whom It May Concern" instead of "dear".

Like this..

To whom it may concern,

I am reaching out to you in regards to the inadequate housekeeping services offered by the service provider. Given my circumstances - working two shifts -  the work it takes for me to clean my house on top of that is overbearing. Considering that I can't possibly be the only one under this predicament, I'm proposing that a more situation modified housekeeping service be offered for people in my situation. Please take this into your consideration. Thank you for your time.

Warmest Regards

Name.

Hope this helps :)

U would need to give us like a page or 2 from the book

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