What's the correct grammar for, in my room ive displayt mi collecktion of cals from evry baseball team

In my room I've displayed my collection of cards from every baseball team.

Explanation: in should be capitalized. ive needs to be capitalized and have an apostrophe added. Displayed is spelled wrong. My is spelled wrong. Collection is spelled wrong, and so is cards. Every is also spelled incorrectly, and a period needs to be added at the end of the sentence.

I think yes but they need to know if they are fully capable of doing the occupation. They should know if it will give them enough money to buy necessities. People should think about personal interest because if tou don't later on you are gokng to want go quit if you dont enjoy it.