Which sentence is constructed correctly and clearly? you should begin now to apply for college if you want to be accepted you should begin now to, if you hope to be accepted, apple for college

The sentence which is constructed correctly and clearly is You should begin now to apply for college if you want to be accepted.  It does not need any punctuation marks because it is just a complete thought without any other idea and does not need any indicator.

Edgar would do the most work because 3/8 in decimal for is 0.375 and that is bigger than 27% (0.27) and 0.34