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nimahmustafa
23.05.2020 • 
English

Which two excerpts avoid wordiness and redundancy?

1) Eliza was saddened to realize she had only $5.36 to spend on gifts. She felt depressed. She felt like the biggest and most obvious loser in the family.
2) The apartment was modest in size and furnishings. it’s tidy living was furnished with home upholstered chairs. The decor overall was simple and practical.
3)Lily giggled and hooted and hollered. She was clearly happy. Her laughter was heard on the street and by the people walking or waiting by.
4) The doll’s hair reaches beyond its waist. In fact, it nearly reached its knees. Sandra sometimes envied the doll because Sandra wished she had long hair.

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