Which vest revised sentence 3 to make it more precise

There aren't any sentences to revise.

Explanation:

However, it is possible to explain some things.

First of all, revise means to change something in a text. To revise a sentence it is necessary to focus on the structure of it, meaning that every part must agree with each other. It is also important to focus on language, meaning that  some words or expressions might not be proper for the target audience. Another important stage is spelling, since we avoid typos and mistakes. The sentence structure and punctuation are also important  since the sentence can be incomplete or seem non-logical if this stage is not verified.

The author uses emotionally charges phrases and words like, "consuming," or "your voice etched us out of the night."
Things that this carry us to the conclusion that this poem is about the deep and harrowing pain that the African people had to go through, and the author reflects heavily on that suffering in the beginning. Later, she writes of a force that sweeps through and brings new life and love to the people, talking about, "If only love could purchase bread, Africans would not be hungry." There is a deep emotional thing that connects us to the author and the people in her poem. It shows us suffering and how one can be happy with nothing even just for a day, as I interpreted in the end.