(1) Schools across the nation is working to make sure students are getting at least 20 minutes of recess each day. (2) In florida and rhode island, laws have been passed guaranteeing 20 minutes of recess for elementary students. (3) In other states and cities, similar laws are being proposed. (4) Parents and teachers understand that students need a break from sitting and studying in order to do her best work. (5) However, all of these laws focus on elementary schools. (6) Elementary students need to take breaks, older students would benefit from breaks, too. (7) Our students need a break! onas wants to make the controlling idea clearer in the first paragraph. Which is the BEST revision he should make to sentence 7?

We need a break!

Just because we are older now does not mean we don’t need breaks!

Adding a break to the school schedule would have many benefits for students and teachers.

For the benefit of teachers as well as students and everyone, we should make sure to add a break to the schedule here at school.

I agree man

Schools across the nation is working to make sure students are getting at least 20 minutes of recess each day. (2) In Florida and Rhode island, laws have been passed guaranteeing 20 minutes of recess for elementary students. (3) In other states and cities, similar laws are being proposed. (4) Parents and teachers understand that students need a break from sitting and studying in order to do her best work. (5) However, all of these laws focus on elementary schools. (6) Elementary students need to take breaks, older students would benefit from breaks, too. (7) Our students need a break!

onas wants to make the controlling idea clearer in the first paragraph. Which is the BEST revision he should make to sentence 7?

We need a break!

Just because we are older now does not mean we don’t need breaks!

Adding a break to the school schedule would have many benefits for students and teachers.

For the benefit of teachers as well as students and everyone, we should make sure to add a break to the schedule here at school.

Explanation:

The peom 'Hap' by Thomas Hardy tell the readers about his point of view regarding various kind of experiences in his life
The poem asking a lot of hard questions about life and overall had a tone of bitterness in it