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If You Would Open Your Eyes
Written by: Thailer Hayes McGalliard
This is short fanfiction and is in no way real.
Jack sat up in bed slightly delirious. This was the 3rd night in a row he had woken up in the middle of the night. He sighed, rubbing his neck before looking to his left where his two partners who were supposed to be sleeping in the bed beside him. Toby laid on his back but Thai wasn’t there.. Jack frowned softly before standing and leaving the room. He tiredly walked down the stairs and stepped into the kitchen planning on making himself a glass of water. He grabbed the cup and began to realize that Thai had not been in bed. He put down the cup and ran to the French doors to the outside world. The cold nipped at his skin immediately and woke him up completely. There on the porch swing sat Thailer. Jack let out a quiet sigh of relief. “Jack? What’s wrong?” Thailer asked in a worried tone looking at his lover. Jack walked over and sat next to Thai. “What are you doing out here? It’s cold for me so it must be freezing for you.” Jack asked, putting an arm around Thai. Thai smiled softly. “It’s my first winter here in the Manor and… “, Thai paused for a moment, “ I just want to- to make this year's Christmas special… not for everyone, just you, Toby and me… but… lately it’s been hard…” Thai stopped speaking and stared into the falling snow. His expression was sad and he looked worn out. Jack pulled Thai over closer to him.” Thai any Christmad with you would be special.. Even if we did nothing” Jack said before kissing Thai’s head. “He’s right ya know?” Toby said, walking out onto the porch. His neck twitched and he let out a small purr. He sat on Thai’s right and planted a kiss on his cheek. “You just need to open your eyes”.
Jack groans his empty sockets opening weakly under the harsh LED light. “Ah! Mr. Jack you’re finally awake, that's great! Now I must inform you that your lovers…”, the unknown voice stopped to think,” Thailer and Toby was it? They’ve been captured! Silly little things tried to come in through the vents!”. The voice stopped to let out a demonic cackle. A familiar face came into Jack’s cloudy view. Zalgo’s human form towered over Jack. Zalgo smiled darkly and whispered, “ I’m going to make you watch those two mortals die a slow and painful death. Serves you right for letting a demon such as yourself consort with humans. Even having a child with one” Zalgo tsked.
“What?” Jack asked in shock. Zalgo put on a face of faux shock. “Oh! You didn’t know? You’re morphodite of a partner Thailer is pregnant! You were going to be a father!” Zalgo then left the room with his sick laughter following, leaving Jack to grieve for his lovers and his unborn child. The man quietly cried. “Pt” A voice let out the high pitched sound alerting Jack. “Jack it’s me! Benny! I’m getting you guys out of here! Thai and Toby got caught on purpose so a phone would be in the building!” Jack let out a relieved sob as Benny untied him and showed him Thai and Toby who were both already safe inside the phone. “Let’s go home”.
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This is a really nice story I like Jack
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Franklin expresses the following American values:
Protestant work ethic
Self reliance
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Unites States emerged as the first nation which believed in the idea of equality, individualism and freedom. This is how idea of "American Exceptionalism" came out.
In "God helps those that help themselves", Benjamin Franklin is clearly talks about self-reliance. He said that to improve our lives, only we are responsible. Only if we take this responsibility, chances of an improved life become greater and even God is on our side. Also, he talks about the work-ethics of the Protestant.