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luzperez2001
18.03.2021 •
English
Could someone look over this and tell me what you think of it :) i hope u like it i wrote it myself
Am I ok?
I smile on the outside
Yet I feel as if I am
dejected from society
Am I ok?
I may be laughing
on the outside but
Im crying on the inside
Am I ok?
I make it seem
as if I'm happy
Like a boat flowing down
The river peacefully
But I'm not
But no matter how hard I try
The water overflows and suddenly I'm overboard
yelling for help but it is as if im yelling into a
Dark hole of empitiness
Am I ok?
As I looked in the mirror
Holding back my sorrows
And preventing them from taking over…
I’m not ok
Struggling to find the appreciation I once had
But it's not as easy as I thought it would be
I smiled and started to bring back the love I once had for myself
I am finding the love I once had for myself
I think I'm going to be ok…..
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Ответ:
It's very well written! :)
Ответ:
Why is Dr. MESMER'S DISCOVERY of a new force so important to the people of France?
Explanation:
A qualified medical doctor, Mesmer believed he had discovered a remarkable new phenomenon, which he called animal magnetism. He used animal magnetism to cure diseases. His treatments were fashionable among the wealthiest citizens of Vienna and Paris, earning Mesmer a fortune. ... Mesmer was a pseudoscientist.
Hope that helped.