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30.04.2021 •
English
How is the following sentence improved by the revision?
Original sentence: Hester was judged by the community for her sin.
Revision: The community judged Hester for her sin.
improves connotation
deletes repetitive words
uses more descriptive language
removes passive voice and correctly places modifier
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Explanation:
what do we have to do
I didn't understood the question
Ответ:
Persona as a literary term refers to the narrator or speaker of the poem, not to be confused with the author — a narrative voice other than the poet tells the entire poem.