In which step of the writing process do you evaluate and improve the clarity, focus, content, and development of a written text? planning
revising
publishing
drafting

Revising

Explanation:

Editing: At this point in the writing process, writers proofread and correct errors in grammar and mechanics, and edit to improve style and clarity. Having another writer's feedback in this stage is helpful.

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A

Explanation:

You can eliminate D. as the paragraph doesn't mention suspension. You can eliminate C. as that has nothing to do with the paragraph either. That leaves A and B. Between these two options A is the better choice as it specifically thanks her for her service and how you will honor her unlike B which goes off topic by referring to the future.