Now, engage in a 10-minute freewriting exercise. Brainstorm and write about anything that comes to mind when thinking about why this character is relatable to readers. Consider these questions while brainstorming: How would you describe the character at the beginning of the novel? How would you describe the character at the end of the novel? What is important to the character? Where does the character live? Is the character likeable? Why or why not? The secret garden

I ran, and ran until there was nothing left but trees in sight. I ran through the woods, my heart pounding and my feet constantly slamming at the ground frantically. I was scared for my life because behind me was a killer. A killer who slaughtered everyone I ever loved and is now coming for me.

I cringed at every twig that broke, and every leaf that crunched beneath my feet because I knew he could hear me. The autumn wind was cold and relentless pushing me back as I pushed forward.

He came closer and closer to me and my heart raced higher with every step he took that was closer to me than before. I did not want to die. But I was helpless against him. I found a hollowed out tree and quickly sheltered within.  I heard him run past me and I stayed quiet.

As soon as I knew he was gone, I cried and cried. Everyone I ever loved is dead, I am truly alone, and now I know that there is no man I can trust.

Reasoning for writing this bit:

I wanted to have fun and write a story. now i'm gonna make a book on this.

it makes him feel anxious, and overwhelms him with loneliness and fear