Read this sentence. Alexander the Great traveled long distances with his army. What would make the best revision of this detail? Alexander the Great traveled many miles with his army. Alexander the Great traveled far and wide with his entire army. Alexander the Great traveled from Greece to India with his army. Alexander the Great traveled an incredible distance with this army.

Personally I would choose "Alexander the Great traveled far and wide with his army."

In Arthur Miller's play "The Crucible", John and Abigail meet alone at Parris's home. In the course of this encounter, Abigail --who  in the past has had sexual relations with John-- she claims that he still feels desire for her, but he denies this.  Abigail wishes to put John on her side because she is being accused of witchcraft for having asked the slave Tituba to cast a death spell on John's wife Elizabeth; Abigail thinks that John will defend her before the judges in order to conceal the adultery. Upon learning of the meeting of John and Abigail, Elizabeth thinks that her husband John still feels affection for Abigail and she claims that John will never redeem himself as long as he lusts for Abigail.