(Revise each sentence by replacing ordinary verbs or adjectives with stronger verbs and precise adjectives.) 1. The quarterback almost dropped the ball during the last minute of the game.

2. Laura worked at her family’s store every weekend and vacation.

3. We drove through two states to see the autumn foliage.

4. The teacher was disappointed by the lack of class participation.

5. Ben left his biology book at home yesterday.

6. William bought expensive shoes that are too small.

1. The quarterback nearly released the ball during the final minute of the game.

2. Laura assisted her family at their store every weekend and vacation.

3. We rode through two states to see the autumn foliage.

4. The teacher was not impressed by the lack of class participation.

5. Ben mislaid his biology book at home yesterday.

6. William purchased costly shoes that are too tight.

Explanation: I hope this helps you, I wasn't entirely sure what your teacher wanted, but I tried.

laura

Explanation:

Laura is a pretty name for a girl

James.

my name hehehehehehehehehehe