Revise this:

are you one of the two million american households that are quartering troops in their own homes? well, be ready, because another 10,000 soldiers are finishing their training and looking for a household to host them. if you are not hosting one yet, you might need to make sure your spare bedroom is ready to receive them.

however, these troops will no longer come with their rations of fruit, as the government has decided we no longer trade with south america. as most of our fruit comes from this region, tropical fruit is no longer going to be available in most supermarkets. therefore, make sure that you find alternatives to feed the new troops.

Are you one of the two million American households that are quartering troops in their own homes? Well, be ready, because another 10,000 soldiers are finishing their training and looking for a household to host them. If you are not hosting one yet, you might need to make sure your spare bedroom is ready to receive them.  

However, these troops will no longer come with their rations of fruit because the government has decided that they no longer will trade with South America. As most of our fruit comes from this region, tropical fruit is no longer going to be available in most supermarkets. Therefore, make sure that you find alternatives to feed the new troops.

It is well written and no much change is required in it.

D

Explanation:A basic education