twinkieslayer
twinkieslayer
19.09.2019 • 
English

Rick allen joined def leppard in 1978, and he was in a car accident, and he lost his arm, and he has a special drum set, and he still drums for def leppard.
what is wrong with the sentence?
the ideas are not coordinate.
it lacks parallel structure.
it has an incorrect conjunctive adverb.
it has excessive coordination.

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