paytonthalacker
paytonthalacker
05.11.2020 • 
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Which best revises sentence 3 to make it more precise? I had so many grand plans in my head for the money
I would soon be making, and I hurried to get ready as
quickly as I could.
O With visions of trendy clothes and piles of spending
money dancing pirouettes in my brain, I took a shower
and got dressed in record time.
As I rushed to shower and be ready on time, I thought
about all the different things I could do with the money
I would soon be making.
O Because I was so nervous, I could not stop thinking
about my new job even as I rushed to shower and get
ready faster than I ever had.
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