Will give brainliest if the answer is applicable (if not it'll get reported)If anyone can help that would be greatly appreciated. I really suck at writing :) Please write your own descriptive essay or poem using the rubric attached below. 3-4 paragraphs

please don't plagiarize

imma write a paragraph abt my hood

Explanation:

1. Inappropriate shift: It should be I can hear the waves vs you can hear.
2. Inappropriate shift: It should be either dried the clothes in the sun or dried them. It is plural and not singular use.
3. Inappropriate shift: It should be they had to take the long road... Again it is referencing plural and not singular
4. Inappropriate shift: It should be and gave them water to drink.
Please vote my answer brainliest! Thanks.