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livleluve76
14.01.2020 •
English
Would someone review this and give their honest opinion. all of the facts are true so that takes some work out.
i really appreciate anyone who out
( don't just steal the 50 points, that's just rude)
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1) Compliments:
° This essay's fluency is perfect. I love the interesting words as well as the great usage of comprehension.
° I loved the conclusion. Despite the last sentence, everything is perfect and clearly helps me understand the aim of the essay.
2) Suggestions:
° I think you shouldn't refer to your school specifically, maybe because it does not show accurate results for this type of essay. Informing readers about your school does not give them any accurate information. I hope you understand what I mean here.
° Where you said "ugh, trust me, I know first hand" makes the essay seem sorta informal. Remember that essay's need to meet requirements, one of the most crucial is for it to be formal. Don't use 'text talk' , etc.
3) Corrections:
° I only see a few grammar errors. Those should be easily detected if you use a spell check.
I hope this helped you. Good luck with your studies! ;)
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imagine dog life :o