Write a story about a man lost at sea. i need a grade 9 answer. 23 points

Here you go! Feel free to alter any sort of sentences or phrases throughout the story! :]

Explanation:

"It was a lightning struck night, when a bold gentleman was cemented in a shabby raft at midnight. The sea was vicious; as if it was blood-hungry and ready to strike. Eventually, the raft started to break apart as the sea ate away pieces of the barge. As the cavalier got more-and-more agitated at the thought of his death edging closer, an idea came into his head. He swiftly looked around the ocean for any scraps of building material. He thought to himself, "Any ropes? Any wood? Nothing..? Nothing..?!", but eventually found segments to fix his troubles. He tried to inch closer to them until he could grasp them. In total; 5 pieces of lumber, 2 threads, and 7 puny pieces of cloth. As time grew thinner, he quickly added these pieces onto his barge. He ended up reforming the place with a larger space, and a junky sail. With his new "sleek" barge, he tried to find an island and escape this misery."

And there you go! Feel free to use this mini story as you please. :]