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leslieguerrero2225
29.10.2020 •
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Can Someone Please Help]: Look at the picture it has the instructions. Write a descriptive poem or essay. ( Here's my poem) ---> The scent of white gravy and fluffy biscuits fill the air. The light green bathtub. awaiting for water to. trickle down the pipes. The bathroom window. letting in rays of sunlight. The birds sitting in the. pretty pink crepe myrtle, singing their beautiful morning, song. Oh, how I wish to have these. precious moments in my grasp again]. Anyone that's really good with poems can you please read the instructions and make sure this poem is a Descriptive poem and that I followed all the instructions and added everything in my poem that was supposed to be added. Also if I missed any punctuation marks can you please add them when you rewrite it down. ( Will Mark Brainliest need to get a really good grade. If this is not a Descriptive Poem can you change it to a descriptive poem. ( Expand the picture to read the instructions). Whoever can actually truly help me will get Brainliest .
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Ответ:
The heady fragrance of white gravy and fluffy biscuits fill the air. The light green bathtub.
Anticipating for water to trickle down the pipes. The lavatory windows. Letting in rays of sunlight. The birds sitting in the pretty pink crepe myrtle, singing their lovely morning, song.
Oh, how I desire to have these. treasured moments in my hold close again].
Ответ:
okay, i made an edited version of your poem. hope this helps!
The pleasant scent of warm, white gravy and fresh, fluffy biscuits filling the air.
The pale green bathtub awaiting for sultry water to trickle down it's pipes.
The bathroom window letting in warm, bright, rays of sunlight.
The birds sitting in the beautiful, hot pink crepe myrtle tree, singing their melodious morning songs.
Oh, how I yearn to have these precious moments in my grasp once again.
what and why did i change things?
sultry: warm, hot, and/or humid
melodious: having a pleasant melody
yearn: intense feeling of longing, or intense feeling of wanting and wishing of something
i used more descriptive words so you can feel like you're there more.
unique words help your poem feel more original.
i changed "fills" to "filling" because, for example: it says "The bathroom window letting..." instead of "The bathroom window lets...". you want it to be consistent.
hope this helps :)
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hi again
sorry that i I couldn't help you last time
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