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prettygirl2204
prettygirl2204
06.10.2019 • 
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Can someone with my conclusion i don't know what to put ! ?

should the private lives of famous people be off limits? because they deserve privacy, they do not consent to pictures, and it’s disrespectful to interfere with their lives.

paragraph 1- celebrities deserve privacy because they want to live a normal life just like we non celebrities do. being famous is cool and all but when it comes to privacy and respect, i think i’d want it.

paragraph 2- celebrities should have a right to consent to pictures being taken of them. it’s only the respectful thing to have when you’re in the public eye constantly. being bum rushed all the time by paparazzi or fans and not really being able to walk outside without a security guard can be really frustrating not just for celebrities but anyone in general.

paragraph 3- all celebrities do have an emotional corner and the public should respect that. making their broken marriages / affairs public and enchasing entertainment factor is not cool or healthy. their profession is to entertain people which they do with the of their movies and music albums. beyond that it is their personal life, just like we have a personal life. they also have secrets just like we have.

paragraph 4- being in the public eye doesn’t mean you shouldn’t have a personal life or have privacy. everyone should be allowed to have a personal life it’s what’s makes us human think of it. if everyone went around telling each other’s business there would be so much problems.

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