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ulilliareinhart2
11.11.2019 •
English
Iwant to make sure there is no spelling errors or anything out of place
here is my paragraph
i want this website to show off my enthusiasm for fishing. i began fishing when i was at the age of 7 years old. i enjoyed it so much that on my spare time i tried to reel in some fish. to this day, i continue to make time to fish. i enjoy it so much that i teach others how to fish. which as far as, what bait to use, what fishing rod to use, and most importanly how to enjoy fishing.
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I want this website to show off my enthusiasm for fishing. I began fishing when I was 7 years old. I enjoyed it so much that on my spare time I tried to reel in some fish. To this day, I continue to make time to fish. I enjoy it so much that I teach others how to fish. Which as far as, what bait to use, what fishing rod to use, and most importantly how to enjoy fishing.
Explanation:
'at the age of' is not needed in that sentence and just makes it drag on longer than it should. Importantly was spelt wrong. Other than those two things, it isn't a bad paragraph.
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