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alexandraparava
alexandraparava
13.05.2021 • 
English

Please help this is my final exam and i dont wanna fail (1) We are sorry to say that we will not be able to publish your short story "Max versus the Robots" in the school literary magazine. (2) Our editorial board enjoyed the story's creative setting and interesting characters. (3) But the board ultimately decided that the plot was too confusing, and several members had no clue what the deal was with the ending. (4) In addition, some readers were concerned that the technical details about robots would not be of interest to most students. (5) Although we have to reject this story, we hope to publish your work in the future, so please submit a story to us again.

Which option best revises this paragraph to maintain a formal tone throughout?

A. Replace sentence 2 with: The journal's board of manuscript evaluators has garnered pleasure from your narrative's innovative setting and noteworthy personae.

B. Replace sentence 5 with: Although we have to reject this story, we'd be psyched to publish you someday, so please send us some more stuff.

C. Replace sentence 1 with: It is said with sadness that your short story "Max versus the Robots" will not be published by us.

D. Replace sentence 3 with: However, the board ultimately decided that the plot was too confusing, and several members found the ending to be implausible.

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