MrKrinkle77
16.10.2020 •
English
Please Please Help! ASAP. Have to retake the test again tomm.
Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to an argumentative editorial.
(1) Year-round schooling would help student achievement. (2) Not so much information would have to be crammed into nine months. (3) Furthermore, the elimination of long breaks, particularly summer break, would significantly reduce "learning loss" and the additional time wasted at the beginning of each academic year to reteach previously learned material. (4) It is clear that year-round schooling helps students learn and retain more. (5) The United States is not the only country to experiment with a year-round school schedule. (6) Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and see that students in these schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars. (7) It is about time that we replaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.
WHICH REVISION WOULD MOST IMPROVE SENTENCE 7?
-suggesting an alternative plan to replace the current school calendar.
-explaining why the current school calendar is outdated and inefficient.
-expressing an opinion about those who oppose changing the calendar.
-restating the strongest piece of evidence used to support the claim.
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Ответ:
A) emotional and passionate.
The tone of this excerpt is emotional and passionate, as can be seen from the amount of passionate words (such as "O!" and "stand forth") and emotionally charged statements ("love mankind," "dare oppose the tyrant," "overrun with oppression") that are used in the text. The idea that Paine wants to convey is that it is time for those who want progress and the improvement of society to stand against tyranny and welcome freedom.