What are three ways you can make your paragraph better in the revision process?

Explanation:

Think about your purpose in writing: Does your introduction state clearly what you intend to do? Will your aims be clear to your readers?

Think honestly about your thesis: Do you still agree with it? Should it be modified in light of something you discovered as you wrote the paper? Does it make a sophisticated, provocative point, or does it just say what anyone could say if given the same topic? Does your thesis generalize instead of taking a specific position? Should it be changed altogether? For more information visit our handout on thesis statements.

Check the focus of the paper: Is it appropriate to the assignment? Is the topic too big or too narrow? Do you stay on track through the entire paper?

I believe the answer is  the historical importance of bicycles to American women
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This introduction is made in order to inform the readers about the overall key points of the wheel of changes. Things such as importance of bicycles to American women will definitely arouse the interest and excitement from the women that could made them join the program