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anthonycortez4993
30.03.2021 • 
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Which revision below is most effective? California's Glass Beach is an amazing place to visit. The beach there isn't sand, but colorful bits of glass that
have been polished smooth by tumbling waves.
Glass Beach in California is amazing. The beach is made of broken glass. There is no sand, only glass. Waves
have smoothed and polished the glass. The glass is found in many colors.
Glass Beach in California is just so amazing! Instead of sand the beach is made of bits of broken glass in all
sorts of colors that has been smooth and polished by waves.
California's Glass Beach is named for the glass that makes up the beach. The glass, in all sorts of colors, is
smoothed and polished, by waves. Amazing!

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