Which Group seemed to value women & allow more rights? Native Americans or Europeans?

Native Americans

Explanation:

To European eyes, the structure of Native American society lacked the complexity of their own community. Yet, their own drawings of the Powhatan people reveal that the tribes’ division of labor and gender roles were actually very advanced, especially where the status of women was concerned. Whereas married women in Europe held few rights to their property, family wealth, or even children, women of the Eastern Woodland tribes had much greater power and autonomy over their produce, conditions of labor, and property. Native women even served as representatives in the tribal councils, and held rights over the land they worked. This lesson demonstrates that although “women’s work” was belittled in European cultures, Native women’s daily contributions were recognized by Native men and the tribe as a whole as vital to the prosperity of the community and worthy of respect. By comparing the condition of women in America and other lands (including colonists), students will discover that women’s status in their community was directly related to the social hierarchy, religious culture, and natural environment in which they lived, and that the combination of those ingredients varied wildly across the continents.

My rewording:

In July 1946, an article proposed that the West adopt a policy of "containment" upon the Soviet Union. The author, George Kennan, a leading official in the construction of the U.S embassy, located in Moscow in 1943, had pushed for the United States to prevent Soviet expansion with many different methods. In fact, George Kennan was utterly convinced that if the Soviet Union could not expand further that the nation's social system would begin to deteriorate.

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Here's a corrected and slightly altered version of what you have:

In July 1947, an article was written and released by George Kennan which proposed that the West adopt a policy of "containment" towards the soviet union. Though he set up the us embassy in Moscow during 1943, he called on the United States to begin to prevent soviet expansion. George was convinced that if the soviet union failed to expand, the social system would eventually break down.