Will make ! which of the following convinced american leaders to change the weak national government created by the articles of confederation? a. the northwest ordinance b. the ideas of patrick henry c. shays's rebellion d. the navigation acts

The problem with this statement is that there are filler words in them. Filler words such as "umm", "like", and "thingy" are usually used when the speaker has trouble putting their thoughts into words. Here's how we can fix it.

What it says:

“So, then it was, like, my turn to try the new machine thingy. It was, ummm, so sweet!”

What it should say:

"It was my turn to try the new machine. It was so sweet!"